This was a pretty nice, calm chapter for the most part. Erin wakes up at the inn, works out with Ulvama (who emphasizes the need for combat readiness, potentially more foreshadowing towards Erin being more of a fighter), then gets a nice bath drawn by the Antinium. There’s a lot of notes on how Erin is much more of a supervisor of the inn now as opposed to doing the actual work. I wonder if this is influenced by Pirateaba just rewriting Volume 1 and all the hard work Erin put in at the beginning of the story.
Erin has been telling her story nightly which has drawn big crowds. I don’t know how but I wish it was in the main story, even if that level of recursion would probably form a singularity of words and we all die screaming into the abyss. I’d be screaming in joy though.
Stargazer’s promise is still at the inn but most of the team wants to head to the new lands. Lehra Ruinstrider is dragging her feet. I think this is meant to show her youth, despite her rank. They mention she has been off since her rival, Wall Lord Dragial, was killed at the end of the last volume.
Ryoka meets with Hedault to try to get the wand with the Dryad seed back. He has recently created a very profitable business making living furniture with the wand, as well as levelled up and specializing his class at level 40. Hedault can see Shaestrel and invites her in, which is interesting, I feel like very few characters are allowed to see deeper into the nature of the fae.
After an explanation, Hedault arrives at the conclusion that he cannot conscionably keep the wand as it uses the magic of a living creature at its core. I liked how he is shown to be so decisive but you can’t help but feel bad for the guy. Ryoka offers him anything to make up for it, and they burn down his apartment and almost die when they experiment on the sci-fi blade. Fortunately, Taletevirion is nearby to save them, being the worst retired character since Teriarch.
We get a brief interlude of Ivolethe playing Meliodore in the game of Fate, an analog of chess with real-world implications. Ivolethe says she likes Ryoka because of the prophecy and because she muddies fate wherever she goes. Oberon is also watching their game.
Ryoka decides to build connections by going on dinner dates with several characters. Ysara, TTV, Tyrion, and finally Erin. She meets with Erin to ask her to forgive Tyrion because Ryoka has to still be a moron. Erin puts up Vietnam flashbacks on the World’s Eye Theater after trying to beat the shit out of Ryoka, says he can never enter the main inn, and says she will kill him if he opposes her on a similar battlefield again. Hardcore, I love it.
Then a brief date with Ryoka and Rags. Rags is more pragmatic than Erin and will take any allies for the future no matter their pasts.
Also at some point we got a better idea of the calendar. 15 months in a year, starting in the spring. 32 days in a month. Winter is 4 months.
Finally, a big kicker at the end of the chapter: Erin has just defeated Niers in chess again and is considering her day, and writing to her penpals when Shaestrel appears. They mention the Gnomes and Shaestrel offers to play Erin in chess, having apparently beaten the Gnomes themselves. If Erin wins, Shaestrel offers to teach her the game of Fate that Ivolethe and Melidore were playing.
This is a level beyond anything in this world and while I doubt it comes to pass, I hope Erin does it. I like when the main characters get unique powers. If you’re reading this, you’re 11 million words into an isekai too, so don’t judge me.
Summary and Thoughts
This chapter was extremely short, mostly serving as a way to shepherd in the Volume 1 rewrite that got posted simultaneously. I’ll be reading through it and I may post about it, but for this chapter:
Mrsha is a central character, spending time with Kenva, Watch Captain Venim’s daughter, as he interviews with Liscor’s council for the new Watch Commander position. Apparently, Captain Zevara doesn’t think she’s the right fit for the role. I agree with the cast of characters, if she isn’t give the job, riot.
A quick note is that Tyrion is now allowed to use the portal door and room to get to and from the Haven and Invrisil. Interesting but I guess it’s pragmatic.
The central part of the chapter is newcomers to the inn trying to get the story of the inn straight and learn all the major events that have occurred. I love the look back at the tumultuous history of the inn, but I could have done without the almost 4th wall break (not Rhir, more Deadpool) that was written. It was almost “Haha wouldn’t it be funny if someone wrote a story about the stuff that happens here? You could call it The Wandering Inn and post chapters twice a week on a story sharing network”
So many people being called to the inn just to listen to Erin tell its story was nice. I love the Antinium and their not-quite worship of Erin.
I don’t recall Ysara meeting or saving Ryoka at all, but I guess I’ll catch it in the reread.
Teriarch/Demsleth briefly censors the word Dragon from Erin’s story, which was comical.
The chapter cuts off right as Erin gets started. Kind of a bummer, I would love a Cliffnotes or in-universe story summary so far, though it’d be near impossible to condense to a reasonable chapter.
Rating
Overall rating: 7.5/10. Enjoyable, short, sweet.
Chapter Summary and thoughts
The story takes place inside a framework of 10 Events Occuring:
- A convening of ships at sea
- An execution
- A boxing match
- An accusation in scarlet
- A hiring of an employee
- An assassination
- A fine
- A duel
- A delivery service opening
- A crossing of borders
Teriarch and Valeterisa get some character development. Valeterisa attempts to create a teleport network to replace Erin’s door to House Sanito. There’s a lot of use of the [Parallel Thoughts] which gives her inner monologue a unique style to say the least.
There’s another framing device for Valeterisa with her remaining budget for the project, which slowly dwindles as she runs into issues.
Eventually her teleportation circles fail due to sabotage and incompetence, she blames Montressa and gets really mean about it, Larra of the Haven steps in for Montressa and slaps Valley and she flies off. There’s a chase to bring her back, with Ryoka almost getting electrocuted, but Ieka hires Fierre who uses Ieka’s Unmarked Coach pass to get the djinn who runs it to chase down Valeterisa. Valeterisa shows emotions and apologizes in a funny, train-of-thought dialogue section. She alters Valmira’s comet to launch herself and the cargo the hundreds of miles instead of teleport and it takes 4 mages to [Featherfall] her landing, hilarious. Also at some point Pirateaba mentioned a rival who alters time and memory in Terandria so that might be interesting.
Teriarch is desperate to prepare the world to fight the dead ____s once more. He takes Rafaema to try to teach her some things. This is a parallel to Valeterisa in that he tries so hard but fails time and time again. He meets with people who were spoken to by ghosts at the conclusion of Volume 8 and tries to inspire them. It has mixed results. The funniest bit was when he was trying to prepare the farmer with a magic sword and the tropes that were lampooned a bit there.
At some point, we get some insight into the Vampire attack on House Byres. Ylawes being so driven to just try to feed his people was rather touching. Delanay the Runner / Vampire Hunter shows up and is set to go hunting the Vampires, which Ylawes clues him into the Lischelle-Drakle family from his previous encounter with them.
The real highlight is Tolveilouka trying to plague the only remaining Byres farm. The way he has been stopped at every attempt to spread a plague is getting comical. For such a strong villain, I wish he actually accomplished some destruction to keep the stakes real. This time, it’s Taletevirion who stops him, dueling him almost to destruction at the same time. I like the unicorn.
Teriarch has another failure when he confronts Tolveilouka, who had sensed his presence and is ready with a weapon designed for dragonslaying, causing Teriarch to flee. Reasonable, but again, a villain who can make some of the strongest heroes flee but can’t even get revenge on the Horns or start the plague he’s designed for? Seems weak to me.
Teriarch drops some dragon lore, gets depressed, and meets with Magnolia. This was the most eye-roll section for me because she mocks him relentlessly, then gives him a couple lines about how he’ll always fly again, but the narration treats it like the combined worst roast and best pep-talk ever. I remember thinking that when she “slew him with a lance of words” that this might be my least favorite part of TWI, the over-dramatization of what’s almost a filler chapter.
Teriarch also is highlighted in being physically out of shape, which is what inspires him to box Alber at the end of the story. He gets the shit beat out of him which helps somehow, but then takes some fancy deep breaths and so watch out, world! Also Rafaema is living in the High Passes so I hope we get some exposition on the mysteries there.
Overall rating: 6/10. A lot of words on characters who aren’t my favorite, giving them small arcs that people that old shouldn’t need. “It’s OK to fail” jeez I’m 28 and I got that in spades.
